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Looking for speakers for a meeting or conference?   

Presently, we offer two workshops:

 Pitch Perfect

 Want to know how to get that agent or editor to say “yes” to your pitch? In Pitch Perfect, editors Tina Gallagher and Pattie Giordani will show you the dos and don’ts of agent/editor appointment etiquette and the elements of a winning pitch. You will also have a chance to practice your pitch and get hands-on help tailored to your needs.

 Marketing Yourself On and Offline

Let’s face it.  Most of us who write don’t do it so we can go out peddling our work on the street. We do it because we love to write.  So while we love the creative process of writing, the business end can be pure torture to our artistic brains. Unfortunately, once the contract is signed and the book is out there, you as the author have to market it in order for it to sell. 

This workshop offers creative ways to promote your writing both locally and online. 

Contact us at LibraEditorialServices@gmail.com.

Grammar Guidelines: Italian vs. English

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Ciao Bella!

By Pattie Giordani

Note: A version of this article originally ran in the Pocono-Lehigh Romance Writers’ newsletter under my Grammar Goddess byline.

 A few years ago I took two Italian courses at my local community college. They were non-credit courses, which means there are no exams and homework is “optional.” However, we used a college-level textbook and homework was not optional if you want to learn anything.

Similarities (Le Parite)

During the first class of Italian I, Maria, our teacher, told us we already know a lot of Italian words due to our affinity with the culture’s food, music, and art. Think about it—words such as minestrone, risotto, frittata, spaghetti, opera, sonata, solo, trio, finale, fresco, gesso, and stucco. Since we already know such words, we also know a lot about Italian pronunciation.

And, even though English is considered a German language, many English words and Italian words originate in Latin. Lucky for me, I had another edge in having studied Spanish for four years and having retained a bit of that language 30+ years later!

Differences (Le Differenze)

Isn’t it interesting that the Italian word for differences is similar to the English word and the word for similar is different?!

OK, back to the point—grammar. The differences between Italian and English can help draw attention to the English rules. In Chapter 1 (Capitolo 1) of our text, we learned “the indefinite article (a, an) has the masculine forms un, uno and the feminine forms una, un’, depending on the first letter of the noun that the article precedes.” All right! Confused yet?

Then, “the definite article (the) agrees with the noun it precedes in gender (masculine or feminine) and in number (singular or plural). The masculine forms are il, l’, lo, gli, and the feminine forms are la, l’, le, according to the initial letter and the number of the word the definite article precedes.”

As you can imagine, countless classes and hours of studying later, I still had trouble keeping all those articles and the usage rules straight. It ain’t easy! Non facile!

Also in Chapter 1, we learned the verb essere, meaning to be. Compare essere with to be, both conjugated in the present tense:

  •  io sono—I am
  •  tu sei—you are (familiar)
  •  voi siete—you are (familiar)
  •  lui e—he is
  • noi siamo—we are
  • lei e—she is
  •  loro sono—they are
  • Lei e—you are (formal)
  •  Loro sono—you are (formal)

As you can see, there are five variations of the verb in Italian (sono, sei, e, siamo, siete) as opposed to three in English (am, are, is)!

Conjugating Italian verbs in the present tense is challenging, and in Italian II we moved on to the passato prossimo—present perfect tense, which indicates an action completed in the recent past. But (of course, there’s a “but”), many Italians use this tense informally to indicate an action or event that occurred in the recent or not-so-recent past.

So I was not surprised that during that second course, I found myself tossing and turning in the middle of more than one night—trying to conjugate Italian verbs in my sleep! And all this started because I wanted to include some Italian words in my novel in progress…

Happy writing! Buon scritto!

 

Meet Tina…

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     Like most writers, I’ve been putting pen to paper as long as I can remember. Things got really serious during middle school when my best friend and I would write what is now referred to as fan fiction for our favorite soap opera couple.  Eventually, I created my own characters and wrote their stories. When I joined my first writers’ group about 10 years ago, we used to critique after our monthly meetings. I found that I really enjoyed helping others with their stories, whether it was story and character development or basic proofreading.

In 2006, I started copy editing for The Wild Rose Press and that eventually led to a position as an acquisitions editor. One great thing about that publisher is that they offer critiques on any rejected manuscripts. So, instead of handing out form rejection letters, I was able to take the time to let the author know what she needed to do to make the book better. Often my letters would lead to the authors emailing me with more questions or sending me samples of their edited work. I found that I really enjoyed helping authors develop their craft.

After acquiring a full-time day job, I had to resign my position at The Wild Rose Press, but luckily I landed a position editing on a freelance basis for Mundania Press, a position I still hold. Through the years, I’ve also worked on a variety of manuscripts…both fiction and nonfiction…as a freelance editor.

With the increased popularity of ebooks and the expansion of the self-publishing industry, Pattie and I felt it was a good time to combine our editing skills and start our own business. I hope through Libra Editorial Services, we can help authors develop their skills and make their books the best they can be.

 

 

Pitch Perfect Workshop

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Our Pitch Perfect Workshop at the LSFW Create Something Magical Conference went very well.  We had a wonderful group of attendees who were willing to share their pitches, making the workshop very interactive.  It was a lot of fun for us and everyone who attended seemed to enjoy the experience.

Check out the summary and review of our workshop on the review blog, Parenthetical Observations by clicking on this link http://bit.ly/GJlDup.

 

 

LSFW Create Something Magical Conference

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Tina and Pattie will be presenting a workshop entitled, Pitch Perfect, at the Liberty States Fiction Writers Create Something Magical Conference on Saturday, March 17, 2012.  The event is being held at the Renaissance Woodbridge Hotel in Iselin, New Jersey.

In this workshop, they will outline the do’s and don’t's of pitching to agents and editors as well as offer hands-on help for perfecting your pitch.

Other speakers include Jonathan Maberry, Virginia Kantra, Caridad Pineiro, Maria V. Snyder, and Nisha Sharma,  to name a few.

Visit http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/conference/ to check out this event.

Welcome to Libra Editorial Services

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Libra Editorial Services is owned by Tina Gallagher and Pattie Giordani, who have over twenty years combined experience in various aspects of editing.  

Over the next couple weeks, we’ll post more information about our background, as well as a detailed list of services.  For now, here’s a basic list of what we offer:

  • Content Editing – plot, point of view, dialogue, character development
  • Copy Editing  - grammar, syntax, style consistency
  • Proofreading – punctuation, spelling, typos

Email for pricing or simply post a comment requesting information and we’ll get back to you.

LibraEditorialServices@gmail.com

 

 

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